The Diffident Hero

The Diffident Hero - NaNoWriMo 2012 - Chapter 6, pt. 3

His mind made up, he put the plan into action, diving back into the water. It took him a couple of dives to get them all, but finally his arms were full of flowers. They’d been snipped off far down from the blossoms, leaving plenty of stem, so they were relatively easy to bundle and carry. He preferred not to think of the mechanism by which they’d been cut down.

The flowers retrieved, he looked toward the shore and swallowed, his throat suddenly tight and dry. “Nevermind,” he told himself. “She said they’re okay, nothing wrong with ‘em. It’s fine.”

He waded toward the group, trying to focus on the splashing of the water he was causing instead of the sounds the bugs themselves were making. He angled himself toward the center of the group.

When he reached them, he stirred up the water at the edge where most of the pollen had collected, sweeping it out into the deeper waters with the cut ends of the flower stalks. After several minutes of determined work, the behavior of the bugs changed noticeably; they seemed to lose interest in the pond, drifting off in ones and twos, heading back to the hillsides where the flowers grew.

When there were only a few left, he waded to shore and dropped the salvaged flowers near them. “Here you go,” he said, “I think you lost these.”

“Thank you kindly, stranger,” the nearest one said, nearly causing him to jump out of his skin in shock. “There’re very few who’d bother to help out the way you just did, and fewer still who’re as entomophobic as you are. You sure are one of a kind, and we appreciate it! If there’s anything we can do for you, you just let us know.”

“Uh …” he cleverly said.

The bug somehow made a sound with its carapace that he’d almost have sworn was a chuckle. “I won’t keep you; you’ve got plenty more surprises coming up ahead of you today with that one, I’m sure. I never do get tired of that, though!”

It wandered back off to gather more flowers; as he’d feared, the flowers he’d retrieved were left behind on the shore. He stood and stared after them a moment, then snapped his gaping mouth shut and squelched his way up the hill to where Sorcha waited, trying hard to suppress a grin.

“You could’ve warned me that they talked,” he groused.

“Where’s the fun in that? It’s so much more entertaining when you find out on your own.” The grin broke free of her constraints. “So what did you learn down there?”

“They don’t like soggy flowers,” he said. “I’d kinda figured they might not want them after all the pollen and nectar had been washed away, but the stems were useful for stirring the water away, at least, so it wasn’t a total waste.”

“Mmm-hmmm,” she said, eyeing the pond speculatively. “Indeed, I can see the value of flower stems for stirring the waters of a pond. And tell me, why did you want to stir the waters of the pond so badly?”

“Well, they were stuck there, weren’t they? They were just milling around, looking like they were confused by all the pollen in the water that they could smell but not reach. The only thing I couldn’t figure out was why they couldn’t go into the water.”

Her eyes widened a bit. “Oh, but you are a clever one then. That was the only thing?”

He suddenly felt less sure of himself. “Um, it’s the only thing I can think of, anyway.”

“Well, it would have to be, wouldn’t it!” she smiled. “Otherwise it wouldn’t be everything.”

“So did I pass?”

She drew herself up imperiously. “Your flower-rescuing and pond-stirring skills are unmatched in all the world. In that, you pass!”

“But …”

“But indeed,” she said, and suddenly she looked more like the serious-eyed quiet woman from the office at work. “But, there was no test. Or rather, not the sort of test you were imagining that you’d find. The situation you encountered, with the Coleoptans stuck on the shore, that’s a part of every day life for them. They’d have worked themselves free given a few more minutes, and indeed, they enjoy the short break, such as it is. There was no need for intervention, though I’m sure they appreciated your willingness to help.”

“One of them did thank me,” he said, feeling a little sheepish.

“The real test allowed me to see the way in which you approached and resolved the situation in order to confirm or deny my suspicions.” She gave a slight smile. “My suspicions are confirmed. You, Brandon, are going to be a tough one.”

“I don’t feel so tough after all that,” he said. “Can you give me any advice on how to do better next time? Was there anything in particular I did that—”

She cut him off with a laugh. “There is one thing in particular, yes. And it’s exactly this, what you’re doing now. You over-think everything, and work yourself into a frenzy trying to plan for every contingency. That’s a habit we’re going to have to break you of, if you’re to be of any use to anyone, especially yourself.”

“Of course I plan things out. How can you take care of a situation like that properly if you don’t have a plan?”

“Having a plan is important, yes; I’d never try to tell you otherwise. But you’ve got to know when you’ve spent enough time planning, and spending any more will just be wasting time. Important as plans are, the best plan in the world is useless if it’s implemented too late.”

He scratched his head, trying to wrap his mind around what she was saying. He recognized the ring of truth in it, but it went against his every instinct and habit of thinking. “How do I learn that, then?”

She grinned hugely. “I have no idea. That’s the fun of it!”

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The Diffident Hero - NaNoWriMo 2012 - Chapter 6, pt. 2

He stood studying the situation intently for several minutes, but nothing really leaped out at him. He glanced back at Sorcha, but she stood impassively, waiting and watching.

He debated climbing back up and asking what he was supposed to do, but he had a pretty strong feeling that wasn’t going to get him anywhere. He’d save it as his last resort.

The pattern tugging at his awareness was maddening. So close to the surface, yet eluding him like a word on the tip of the tongue that just won’t come out.

The surface. He glanced back at the edge of the pond, but couldn’t see anything from his vantage point. He shuddered. He was going to have to get closer.

He started to edge over toward where the milling bugs gathered, keeping an eye on the water’s edge and doing his best to keep his eye on the water’s surface.

Sure enough, as he got closer, he began to see specks floating on and just under the surface. They were tiny little grains, only visible in clusters, and as he got closer still, his suspicions were confirmed. There were a large number of the odd flowers laying scattered across the bottom of the pond.

Must’ve fallen in, and with the pollen floating up so close to shore on the surface, the bugs can smell it. Wonder why they can’t just go get them though … some sort of water aversion I guess, he thought.

Which means maybe I can help them!

For whatever reason, the insect … people, couldn’t or wouldn’t enter the water. Which made it a perfectly nice place for Brandon to be. He edged around a little farther out from their section of the shore, stripped down to his underwear, and waded out to where he’d seen the scattered flowers.

Holding his breath, he dived down for a better look at the flowers that had sunk to the bottom. He estimated there were a couple dozen of them. He figured they should be relatively easy to retrieve; the pond bottom was smooth and flat, with no places for wayward blossoms to hide.

Of course he had no idea if they’d actually have any interest in or use for the soaked flowers, but this was his best guess as to what Sorcha intended for him to do. He’d collect the lost ones and try to clear the floating pollen that seemed to be confusing the one group, and see how they reacted.

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The Diffident Hero - NaNoWriMo 2012 - Chapter 6, pt. 1

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“Um … just so you know, I know I have a kind of an unfair phobia about bugs—” Brandon began.

“Oh, I know. They creep and crawl through your subconscious and scare the bejeezus out of you, all those long legs and chitinous shells and multifaceted eyes and bristly hairs …”

He felt himself going a bit green at the mental imagery. “Uh, yeah, that’s exactly right. Hey, you can’t … um, read my mind, can you?”

“Nah, I was looking over your artwork on the internet the other day. Reading minds is tough. I save it for the really important stuff.” She smirked at him. He couldn’t decide if he was relieved or even more concerned.

“So what—”

“Get down there.” She pointed straight toward the edge of the small pond where the largest concentration of bugs were gathered.

“And th—”

“Go!” She shooed him off.

He snapped his mouth shut and found himself moving automatically, almost unwillingly. Sorcha stayed where she was and watched as he made his way down the gentle slope to the water’s edge.

The path down to the water was a beautiful one, as long as he kept his eyes away from what he was headed into. The grass—no, not grass, he thought; it was more like a low-growing, ground cover fine-frond fern of some type—was a lush, deep green and spotted here and there with large, bulbous flowers that reminded him of sunflowers, only nearly spherical. Many were almost dripping with nectar.

As he got closer, he got a better look at the bugs, despite his best efforts. They were big; they came up to almost his knee, and their bodies, shaped like enormous beetles, were almost as long as he was tall, not counting the legs or antennae. They were milling about the water’s edge, ignoring him completely.

His artist’s eye started spotting patterns immediately, even while he was focusing on ignoring the queasy feeling in his stomach at the site of all of those legs shuffling huge insect bodies around. The ones right at the water’s edge were the ones moving … almost uncertainly, he thought. They’d approach the water, but hesitate and back away, wander about, and try again.

Those further out from the edge were behaving quite differently. It looked more like what he’d have expected from insects, even ones that apparently built rather human-like houses. They were harvesting clumps of the spherical nectar-rich flowers he’d seen earlier. They’d approach a bloom, snip the stalk off a few inches below the base of the flower, and then neatly catch the falling blossom as it fell. Each time one of them did this, a small spray of nectar and pollen would fly into the air and onto the bug. Collected flowers were moved off in a line back to one of the huts he’d seen.

He was grateful he didn’t have allergies.

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The Diffident Hero - NaNoWriMo 2012 - Chapter 5, pt. 3

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“We’re just passing through here, right?”

“Well we were, but now I don’t think so. We’ve got to get you used to this new world, and I think this is just the perfect place to get started with that!”

Brandon got a sinking feeling in his stomach. He wasn’t sure if it was dread, or the certainty that she was going to enjoy this.

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The Diffident Hero - NaNoWriMo 2012 - Chapter 5, pt. 2

“Oh don’t you worry about that,” she said. “For starters, nothing at all has gone back to normal. I’m afraid that it never really will, either.”

He stared hard at her, wondering if this was all some kind of joke. The wings on her back fluttered in his vision, barely visible, whispering “This is no joke!”

He took another look around. There was the grungy-looking copy and print place across the street; it had seen better days. There was the sandwich shop, his favorite for when he needed a quick bite for lunch but had to be back at his desk in a hurry.

And out of the corner of his eye, he could swear there was an enormous oak growing out of the pavement down the street, with walkways extending out from just beneath the canopy.

Had someone built a tree house facade or model for some event? He whirled to face it, to get a better look, but when he turned his full attention to it, it was gone.

That’s when he spotted the low hill where the sandwich shop had been just moments before. There was a low, round wooden door painted green inset there, flanked by two wooden-framed windows with rustic flowerpots on the sills. It looked for all the world like Bag End, the home of Bilbo and Frodo Baggins from Tolkien’s The Hobbit and The Lord of the Rings.

He spun back again and stared at the sandwich shop’s sign, which proclaimed the beginning of a sale on foot-long meatball sandwiches. There was neither hill nor green door in sight.

Hmmm, could go for a sandwich for dinner a little later, actually, he thought, then mentally gave himself a slap.

“You’re beginning to see it now, aren’t you,” she said, sounding pleased.

“I saw a tree with walk—there it … no, where did it go? And the hill, with the round doors—”

“What you’re seeing are overlapping sections of the world.”

He blinked. “Like in Sliders?”

She clapped her hands together excitedly. “That was the one with Jerry O’Connell and Johnathan Rhys-Davies sliding between parallel Earths, right? I love that show! But no, not like that at all. These aren’t parallel worlds, they’re just different parts of this world that normally you don’t notice.”

“So why am I noticing them now?” He felt his grip on the situation slipping away from him, and the start of another headache coming on.

She crossed her arms and arched her brows at him. “How many times do I have to tell you? You were called.”

“But what does that mean?” he cried in exasperation. If he’d thought he was attracting stares before, he was really getting looks now.

“Oh, you humans are really hopeless, I swear. Sometimes I don’t know why I bother with any of you. If it weren’t for your imaginations … okay, look. Do you have dinner plans? This is going to take a while to get through.”

“I was planning on—”

“Okay, good. Come with me.” She grabbed him by the wrist and they walked down a street that suddenly looked like it’d come straight from an anti-pollution warning advertisement. The air was filthy, the streets were worse, the buildings were low two or three storey factories belching smog and ash everywhere. “Not my favorite part of town, and do watch your step, but it’ll get us where we need to go faster.”

“How the hell did you do that?” he exclaimed.

“Oh come now, you can barely even see the different parts of the world, and you expect me to be able to explain how to move between them? You can’t learn to fly before you learn to crawl, Brandon.”

“Um, okay, sure,” he said, not entirely sure how to respond.

The air smelled of sulfur and coal, gas and rock and the sharp tang of metal. It burned his throat something fierce to breathe it. He’d never wanted a glass of water and a breath of fresh air so badly in his life. “This place is horrible, how can you stand it?”

“I don’t come here often, and each time I do, I remember why,” she called back, sounding as bad off as he was feeling. “But like I said, it’s the fastest way to where we need to go to get you the answers you’re looking for!”

The sky was a poisonous-looking yellow-brown for all the smog, and was taking on a distinct orange tint as the sun lowered itself toward the horizon. They passed through the factory area and walked along a street filled with what he’d have sworn were decrepit old brownstone tenements transplanted straight from New York City decades ago. Clotheslines were strung up between buildings in places, with clothes hanging out to dry. Some of them looked normal enough. Others made him wonder just what kind of people lived in this place.

“Hey, where are all the people?” he wondered aloud.

“Oh, they’re all at work still.” She nodded back toward the factories they’d left behind. “They work long shifts, won’t be off for hours yet.”

All of them?” he wondered.

“In this part of town, yeah. We wouldn’t be here if they were off work, way too dangerous.” She was huddled in on herself and walking quickly, with purpose. He kept pace, eager to be away from this place, whatever it was.

They came to the end of a block and she smiled. “Here!” She snagged his wrist in her hand and turned a corner. She moved so fast that he swung wide to follow her, and found himself jogging to catch up, going down the side of a grassy hill with a well-worn dirt path carved across the face. The change was so abrupt he actually choked on a lungful of fresh air and sputtered.

“What’s this?” he asked. He thought for a moment it might be the area that the Hobbit-like hill had been from until he noticed they were in a distinctive village with some sort of clay huts that were made and apparently fired all in one piece. They almost looked like pinkish-brown igloos with windows and ventilation holes up top. It was lovely, in a weird-looking sort of way.

“This is just a section of town we’re passing through,” she said with a bright smile. “Honestly there are faster ways we could’ve gone, I just really like this place, and it won’t slow us too much. And I don’t know about you,” she said, relief in her voice, “but I really needed to get out of that smog. This was the fastest safe place to get to.”

Once again he noticed a curious lack of people. He looked all around them as they moved through the village, but if there was anyone around, he couldn’t see them. “Are these people all at work, too?”

“Oh, no, not these ones. They’re around, mostly down by the water there,” she said, pointing. He followed her finger and saw a collection of scuttling iridescent domes moving about by the water’s edge.

“Those … are those giant bugs?” he asked hesitantly, suddenly feeling a bit squeamish.

She looked at him reprovingly. “Bugs? Yes, but you don’t have to say it like it’s a dirty word, you know.”

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The Diffident Hero - NaNoWriMo 2012 - Chapter 5, pt. 1

That was the moment that Brandon’s world truly transformed itself into something he barely recognized. He couldn’t have been more baffled than if he’d suddenly found himself transported into any of the worlds of his comics and books and movies. It certainly felt like that was where this new world belonged.

It would have been terribly exciting, except that those worlds were experienced while dry and warm and comfortable at home, not soaking in the sludge with the heroes.

Sorcha had wasted exactly enough time for them to finish their coffees, and then they were off. He didn’t know what she did, but one minute they were in the café, and the next …

“What happened? Where’d the café go?”

They were still seated, and the transition had happened so suddenly (or was it so gradually?) that he couldn’t put his finger on exactly when it had occurred. The space they were in resembled the café in many respects. The floor plan of the building seemed to be the same. There was a counter where the café’s counter had been. There were tables and chairs in something resembling the same locations as the café’s.

He wasn’t a particularly devoted student of interior design, but he was reasonably certain the café had not been decked out in quite this much crystal and faerie dust when he’d entered.

He gaped for a moment and turned back to Sorcha, only to gape again. Sorcha sat before him, gazing intently again, a wide grin on her face.

“Um … are those … do you … what …”

“Something you’d like to ask?” She inquired innocently. The translucent, barely visible wings on her back fluttered and shimmered as she hunched her shoulders forward, staring even more intently.

“Are … those … wings?”

“There, that wasn’t so hard, was it? And yes, of course they are!” She fluttered them meaningfully.

“You’re—”

She nodded, suddenly all serious. “I’m one of the People, yes. Though that’s not actually what we call ourselves, you know. As dream names go, it’s not too bad, I guess. It’ll do for now.”

“Dream names?” He kind of hoped she’d keep on giving him new questions to ask. It kept him from focusing on the changes to the café—and, if his peripheral vision wasn’t playing tricks on him, the rest of the city.

“I certainly hope you don’t think that story you came up with was true! All that wandering around in the swamp and killing things and the circle of trees? You’d have to go far, far away from here to see or do any of that!” She looked almost affronted. “No, it was all just a dream, something you came up with to make sense of the call. Happens all the time.”

“So I’m not the only one, then.” That was oddly comforting. He could get lost in a crowd.

She laughed merrily. “Oh no, no. There are lots of others. Well, some others. A few others. Not too many right now, actually, but they’re out there.”

“So you can fly?” He looked the wings over carefully; they didn’t look strong enough to support her.

“I sure can! Not like this, though, not with these or in this body. But yeah, if I change, I can fly.”

“So wait, you can change your body?”

She rolled her eyes. “Come on, Brandon, think a moment. You just witnessed the entire café change, and I changed along with it. Is it really so hard to believe that I can change again in other ways?”

“Right. Sorry, it’s a lot to take in.”

“Well, you’d best get used to rapid change. You’ll need to be on your toes where we’re going!”

“Where are we going?”

“Let’s go have a look.” She smiled and took his hand. They rose and made their way to the door, past crystalline tables and windows covered with slatted blinds. Sorcha dropped his hand, took hold of the door handles, lead him outside, and whirled to him with an impish grin.

Beyond her, the city looked just as it had after work. Skyscrapers rose in the distance. Buildings of more moderate height crowded around them. Cars raced down the road, while the sidewalks bustled with people coming to and fro. Some of them gave him startled glances and looks of recognition, and he remembered with a start that he wasn’t quite through with his moment of fame just yet.

“I don’t get it, what’s changed?” he asked.

“You!” she exclaimed. “Don’t worry if you don’t see it just yet. It’ll happen.”

“Why’d everything go back to normal, but you still have your wings?” It was true. She was standing in the middle of the sidewalk, wings flapping lazily behind her, and people weren’t giving them a second glance, even those who moved out of their way to avoid walking into them.

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